Friday, March 2, 2007

The Song That Was...

She sat there like a corpse, lifeless at the piano. She stared straight ahead while a crowd of a few hundred stared at her. Her fingers moved gracefully, stroking the piano keys as if she were in a trance. She was the center of attraction. All eyes were on her but HER eyes spoke about the pain in her heart. She was playing THE song. His song. The song she wrote for him, the song she sang to him just before he left. She made a promise, to sing this song for him and for him only. It was their song. And here's she was breaking that promise. She hated herself for it. As she sang she felt his arms wrap themselves around her...Felt this lips brush across her neck, his breath caressing her skin while she played for him, just like he used to. a single tear ran down her expressionless face. This was so dear, so precious, so delicate..It hurt her heart singing it. "Please make this stop. Please..." begged her dying heart.


"Your soul is aching and its dying to be heard,This might be painful but consider the worth,And when you feel like there's nobody on your side,They will embrace you with a radiant smile.."



She sang The last line. The crowd stood in an uproar of awe. But she heard nothing. The silence ran through her. she ran off stage and stood behind the curtains. She dropped to her knees, broke down and cried.. Never has she felt so much pain, anger, fear, betrayal, and self loathing in one night before.

"I miss you. I love you. Please come back. Make this pain go away...."

6 comments:

Tammy said...

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG...i LOVEEEE IT!!!i absolutely do!!so nice mannnnn....xP
Keep up the good work!

Michelle said...

Its sooo good...I love it too..It actually makes u feel her pain..Her love..Her anger..Everything..Pauline..Keep it up..You're a good writer..U noe how to make ppl feel and understand ur writing..Love it gurl..

Anonymous said...

hmmm... wat can i say, it was really good! pauline i've read your work.. but this is really good.. intense.. and yes very EMOTIONAL!!!jus like u!*laughs*
i liked how u expalined every detail of the girl's feelings.
fantastic work! *winks*

Anonymous said...

Great work, i feel depressed already... lol. No seriously, keep it up. But not too often ya, otherwise some of us might go all s.m. suicidal...

AND DONT CALL ME BOT!
i'm not a bot.
i pwn bots.

(cap-man wuz here)

MelzKC said...

hmm... maybe what am i gona say here gona upset the other 3 who commented. =P

this kinda story quite normal lor to me, not emo at all and certainly cant makes tears flow... its just me i guess... =D

soli la, that just my point of view, ignore it if u don't like. =)

~michelle~ said...

ooo...looks like im de 3rd michelle here...ehehe. but i read it 1st!!!! haha...n like i said dat day...its totally, absolutely, no-words-to-describe-ly, FANTASTIC!!! de descriptions u give n de way u write jz draws the reader...making him/her feel exactly like the girl in de story. everything she feels, her love, pain, loss, n....everything la!! so it makes it totally captivating..in every way. in short....LUV ITTTTT!!!!!! lol..keep it up girll...*muakx*